Tuesday, 19 June 2018



Survival tips/ reading inquiry
In my class we have been reading and writing,
my book is about survival tips.
We have to find all the important detail and write in a book or computer.
I found out a lot of important survival tips, like why you should bring a device and extra food and water supplies.
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  1. Anonymous3 August 2018 at 09:28

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  2. Anonymous3 August 2018 at 09:35

    Kia ora, I am Jiten from Makauri School.
    I really liked the way you have exsplained the way how you were doing things and what you were doing
    I learnt that your post can be little but can still be a good post
    Next time you could MAbay explain more about why you were doing this activity. Also you could maybe make this post longer.
    If you would like to see my learning visit my blog
    http://makaurijitenr.blogspot.com/
    Mā te wā
    JIten

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    1. Anonymous6 August 2018 at 09:15

      Thanks for your positive feed back I will make sure that I will
      come and visit your blog, if you have any questions you feel free to ask.

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