I enjoyed writing this poem because your writing about a place that has made dreams come to life
just because of their effort they know the star can’t take you all the way,
you have to put effort in your dreams it can’t come by the snap of your finger, can it.
just because of their effort they know the star can’t take you all the way,
you have to put effort in your dreams it can’t come by the snap of your finger, can it.
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